Sandra Feldman


Activate The Better You - Poem by Sandra Feldman

The trouble with us Is,
That we try to think,
With some unfeeling thing,
Called a Brain,
That does not always guide us,
To the right domain,
It generally gives off evil thoughts,
Of destruction and others slain.

Think with your Soul,
Spiritualize, yourself,
Feel pity, kindness,
Of Love, the finest,
Towards others, brothers
We have but one life to live,
Live it in fullest harmony,
Learn not to take but to Give!


Comments about Activate The Better You by Sandra Feldman

  • Gold Star - 16,098 Points * Sunprincess * (7/20/2014 7:46:00 AM)

    ............love the thought....caring and sharing is most important....let's donate things to others....let's give when someone asks for something...and if someone looks sad or depressed....let's give them a kind word and a hug....maybe we can help them to smile again... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,000 Points Valerie Dohren (7/16/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    Good advice Sandra - give me a loving soul over a cold brain any day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,679 Points Mr. Nobody (7/16/2014 12:50:00 AM)

    I am so on board 15/16th

    That is still a sold A in my book

    Nice and long!

    I'm getting nervous ticks
    666 is knocking
    run? Run! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 437 Points Jena Crowe (7/15/2014 9:59:00 PM)

    I need to activate a better writing hand! You inspire me.
    This reminds me of a self-help book- -not in a bad way tho!
    You seem sincere. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,729 Points Mark Heathcote (7/15/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    A very well rounded written; poem with a meaningful message. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,117 Points Mandolyn ... (7/15/2014 8:11:00 PM)

    that last line gets an 11! 11+

    :)) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,758 Points Eugene Levich (7/15/2014 7:47:00 PM)

    If only everyone in this world thought like our Sandracita... what a nice place it would be! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 15, 2014


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