Addiction Poem by Devils Favorite Child Blade

Addiction

Rating: 4.0


if you were my drug
id take you every day
just so i can waste away
if you stay at the bay
ill head your way
theres nothing left to smug
squash like a bug
NEVER!
never let me be
never let me flee
i love you with all my life
dont let me bleed my love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nice poem. it was short and sweet, i really enjoyed the rhyme in the poem. well done :)

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Emily Angel 15 October 2011

Nice write.....You've expressed your love beautifully...

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 20 October 2011

wow that was really good great job

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

If love is a drug i am sure no police will prison the love addicts..hahahaha by the way it is good poem. keep write more-Unwritten Soul

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Very nice, meaningful write...love can be addictive. -SG

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Alookh (matin) 27 September 2013

fantastic! ! ! ! ! .......................................................................................

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Chris Blazo 02 October 2012

Short and to the point. Good one! Love is like a drug.

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Eindaray Kyaw 10 September 2012

really vivid imagination that is created by a great poet.....I enjoy this one! !

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Neela Nath Das 09 March 2012

Ah! What a poem! Short, but deep.. Eagerness with innocence.

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Pheko Motaung 06 March 2012

A majestic meaningful poem! Thanks for sharing

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