Painfull Suffering Poem by Devils Favorite Child Blade

Painfull Suffering

Rating: 3.9


Dagger of pain,
kepper of souls,
why must it rain,
why have goals,
why must my soul be torn,
why must i be scorn,
seasons change,
people go dreanged,
souls lift,
bodies rot,
whats left in this world,
fight with all your might,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 02 November 2011

A great poem really liked it. A great write.

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Pari Dharawat 04 November 2011

I like the whole meaning and the element of the poem and the positive outlook line - i liked to read about might part - which is' fight with all your might', the only thing is that it felt a bit out of sync. you write nice the thought is real good too. keep writing.

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 07 November 2011

wow that was amazing so much said in so little bit of worods it was jus tamazing good job

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Silentpoet Grl 10 November 2011

Strong emotion in this poem. I like it. Great job!

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Christina Hodges 10 November 2011

Good work and you write some neat poetry KEEP IT UP! ! ! :) :)

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The Devils Girl 21 February 2012

I love this poem so much

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The Devils Girl 08 February 2012

ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS I LOVE IT AND THAT SUMS IT UP: D

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Devils Favorite Child Blade 13 December 2011

thank you all for these kind words and the last line i had to censor it because the wont let me use duck change the D to Fand and i'd would have written 'duck this with all my might'.

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Crimson Love 28 November 2011

This is a good poem, your emotions were portrayed well, nice job.

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Strong and powerful..good use of words. -SG

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