Uriah Hamilton

Adoration Of The Feminine - Poem by Uriah Hamilton

In the valley of forbidden dreams,
I see my heart explode
At the feet of a Queen;
My pulse rate increases
At a merciless speed.
I’m more accustomed to shadows
Than lingering in exotic eyes
Where my soul undrapes
Every protective layer of disguise,
But I’m here on bended knees
In adoration for the feminine
Wanting to be the indebted servant
To the perfumed blouse,
To the soft lips of whispered secrets
And the enchanted kiss,
I lay wounded in ecstasy
And will disappear
Into the background of her mirror
As she brushes her shimmering hair.

Comments about Adoration Of The Feminine by Uriah Hamilton

  • Rookie Austen Bradford (12/2/2006 11:55:00 PM)

    I love every word, it's beautiful and well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (8/26/2006 7:05:00 PM)

    Uriah, this one comes from the soul. Enchanting poem. Hearfelt. love, Allie xxxxxxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ebone' Ingram (8/19/2006 12:55:00 PM)

    this one made me realize...that only a few men in life...know Queens when they see them.
    and you are one of those. i respect that very much.

    eni da kid (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (7/31/2006 11:54:00 PM)

    This piece is, quite simply, magnificent. Heart-wrenching, too. t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (5/14/2006 6:13:00 PM)

    Wow - there are still some good guys left! Where my soul undrapes is one of those wish I'd thought of that lines! Great stuff, really great stuff.
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (3/9/2006 4:10:00 PM)

    A story that opens up it's cover and invites the reader in for a real treat.Great write.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Leclerc (2/24/2006 8:53:00 PM)

    This takes me to about a hundred places, real and imagined, physical and very physical. Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lisa Arnold (2/21/2006 5:18:00 PM)

    wonderfully written, much enjoyed this write, you are very talented! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shannon Chapel (2/11/2006 10:57:00 AM)

    Oh, Uriah. Your eternal sweetness and shameless adoration will always melt my twitterpated heart. I lie in reverence - smitten and humbled at the foot of every poem

    You are a true gentleman, and I for one love you for it. Thank you for being you, and for sharing your beautiful spirit with the rest of us.

    xoxo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hugh Cobb (2/10/2006 7:09:00 PM)

    Yes, to be the servant of love is much desired, even to the point of self-abasement. Very erotic and surrendering. Indeed we should all worship the feminine aspect of divinity much more, and through it treat each woman in our lives as if she, herself, were the Goddess. Lovely write.

    All the best,

    Hugh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eila Mahima Jaipaul (2/10/2006 3:58:00 PM)

    This is beautiful, any woman who wouldn't fall at your feet for saying this would have no pulse of their own.
    -Eila (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (2/10/2006 8:38:00 AM)

    So beautiful and flowing as if I'm in a dream.....Just to be touched and adored like that :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivy Christou (2/10/2006 7:37:00 AM)

    wow... any woman would love to be even half adored as you describe in this poem. great tribute to feminism!
    HBh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (2/10/2006 7:04:00 AM)

    I love the little pieces of what it is to be feminine that you capture in your poems....the perfumed blouses, the tinkling of bracelets etc. I love how you see the beauty so clearly. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sweet Seven (2/10/2006 5:21:00 AM)

    ooooohhh... feel so great to be feminine and adored =P (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina Onyemaechi (2/10/2006 4:53:00 AM)

    Hey, Uriah, sing this beautiful, passionate, enrapturing piece of writing to Miss X and tell me if she doesn't let you make love to her on the spot! ! ! : -) Warmly, Gina. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Joy Vanderhelm (2/10/2006 4:49:00 AM)

    Absolutely adored it, Uriah. A very romantic and alluring pull into the musteries of the heart and just how enraptured people can get in them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ***** ********* (2/10/2006 4:19:00 AM)

    A loving flowing dream Uriah, you are certainly going in the right direction of make it come true with this wonderfully romantic poem of yours. 10 from Tai, with dreams always in her minds eye. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 10, 2006

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