Treasure Island

Uriah Hamilton


Adoration Of The Feminine


In the valley of forbidden dreams,
I see my heart explode
At the feet of a Queen;
My pulse rate increases
At a merciless speed.
I’m more accustomed to shadows
Than lingering in exotic eyes
Where my soul undrapes
Every protective layer of disguise,
But I’m here on bended knees
In adoration for the feminine
Wanting to be the indebted servant
To the perfumed blouse,
To the soft lips of whispered secrets
And the enchanted kiss,
I lay wounded in ecstasy
And will disappear
Into the background of her mirror
As she brushes her shimmering hair.

Submitted: Friday, February 10, 2006

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  • Ebone' Ingram (8/19/2006 12:55:00 PM)

    this one made me realize...that only a few men in life...know Queens when they see them.
    and you are one of those. i respect that very much.

    eni da kid (Report) Reply

  • Anna Russell (5/14/2006 6:13:00 PM)

    Wow - there are still some good guys left! Where my soul undrapes is one of those wish I'd thought of that lines! Great stuff, really great stuff.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Duncan Wyllie (3/9/2006 4:10:00 PM)

    A story that opens up it's cover and invites the reader in for a real treat.Great write.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • Esther Leclerc (2/24/2006 8:53:00 PM)

    This takes me to about a hundred places, real and imagined, physical and very physical. Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Shannon Chapel (2/11/2006 10:57:00 AM)

    Oh, Uriah. Your eternal sweetness and shameless adoration will always melt my twitterpated heart. I lie in reverence - smitten and humbled at the foot of every poem

    You are a true gentleman, and I for one love you for it. Thank you for being you, and for sharing your beautiful spirit with the rest of us.

    Shannon
    xoxo (Report) Reply

  • Hugh Cobb (2/10/2006 7:09:00 PM)

    Yes, to be the servant of love is much desired, even to the point of self-abasement. Very erotic and surrendering. Indeed we should all worship the feminine aspect of divinity much more, and through it treat each woman in our lives as if she, herself, were the Goddess. Lovely write.

    All the best,

    Hugh (Report) Reply

  • Eila Mahima Jaipaul (2/10/2006 3:58:00 PM)

    Uriah,
    This is beautiful, any woman who wouldn't fall at your feet for saying this would have no pulse of their own.
    -Eila (Report) Reply

  • Ivy Christou (2/10/2006 7:37:00 AM)

    wow... any woman would love to be even half adored as you describe in this poem. great tribute to feminism!
    HBh (Report) Reply

  • Mary Nagy (2/10/2006 7:04:00 AM)

    I love the little pieces of what it is to be feminine that you capture in your poems....the perfumed blouses, the tinkling of bracelets etc. I love how you see the beauty so clearly. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Gina Onyemaechi (2/10/2006 4:53:00 AM)

    Hey, Uriah, sing this beautiful, passionate, enrapturing piece of writing to Miss X and tell me if she doesn't let you make love to her on the spot! ! ! : -) Warmly, Gina. (Report) Reply

  • Joy Vanderhelm (2/10/2006 4:49:00 AM)

    Absolutely adored it, Uriah. A very romantic and alluring pull into the musteries of the heart and just how enraptured people can get in them. (Report) Reply

  • ***** ********* (2/10/2006 4:19:00 AM)

    A loving flowing dream Uriah, you are certainly going in the right direction of make it come true with this wonderfully romantic poem of yours. 10 from Tai, with dreams always in her minds eye. (Report) Reply

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