Treasure Island

Eyan Desir

(caribbean)

... ADULTERY...A collection of 7 deadly sins


In the circle of love
Wrapped with loyal bonds
Clever demons play their songs
In mortals weakness moments
The tunes of love and lust
Creeps within their core
Silencing all their morals
Rendering these mortals
To their emotions
Clever demons laugh
Whiles their legs splits apart
And a sinner rushes in
To eat the forbidden fruit

04 August 2009 Copyright © ® Eyan desir. All rights reserved

Submitted: Tuesday, August 18, 2009
Edited: Monday, October 05, 2009

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  • Tom Fox (9/26/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    yah, that was straight to the point! ...i dig your direction and intention...you're pretty dang good with words! (Report) Reply

  • Kristina B; Williams (9/16/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    absolutely loved it..short yet it sent shivers down my spine..if you read any of my poems, i have adultery down to a tee.10 (Report) Reply

  • Whitney t (8/27/2009 6:42:00 PM)

    great poem it is very desribable in all ways
    great job again and very creative
    keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (8/27/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    excellent lyric metaphor:
    ''The tunes of love and lust
    Creeps within their core
    Silencing all their morals
    Rendering these mortals
    To their emotions''
    and excellent poem, thank you for sharing.................10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (8/27/2009 12:43:00 AM)

    eye opener..
    temptations are just nearby....
    sweet and appealing....
    10

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (8/26/2009 6:54:00 PM)

    Hey man..
    how are you? ?
    after a long time turn to your page.. after S.L and Windies ate a kangaroo curry! ! ! ! ! .....

    hey very good write.. very creative and nice to read.., , very interesting title..
    poem didn't disappoint either, .. very good..! ! ! 10..

    cheers// best wishes
    Shan (Report) Reply

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