... Be Strong Poem by Eyan Desir

good message...good advice...inspiring voice yours...10

splendid! very inspiring poem!

That's really hot.......against these we all should arise our voice

yes indeed some we deem friends...turn out to be vultures great lines...thanx cheers

True! With God we can over come all. Nice one! ! !

very inspiring... you realy had thre gift in those simple words, no need to dig on my thick dictionary its simple to understand and easy to feed the mind! great!

........The hands of God Man will learn to be strong nice! ! ! ! ! The God is really our strength. Be strong and blessed! !

determination is success.... here's my favorite line...Blow your nose, not your mind

give yourself a 10+++ It has the inference of a traditional Haiku that hangs in the mind for a lot longer than three lines. the 'mouth' s fight to eat the bread' along with the, ' Vultures that make more bread' compeling lines for mind's that find the, 'mana of life' is in the messages, emotions, and feelings conveyed in poetry. nice job! ! !

Dear poet, Difficult times reveal our characters. Hard times is a solid ground where miracles can be forged, hope can abound and life prove itself beyond our expectations. There´s a always a blessing disguised as despair and suffering... Nice doing! Thanks for sharing.