After sex with you
I’ve got your smell on my skin.
You’ve got my smell too.
And you’ve got the smell of sin.
After sex with me
You go away and I stay.
I do not mind it.
For me it is just a game.
After sex with you
I’ve got your smell on my sheet.
I take it and put
Into my washing-machine.
After sex with me
You’ll tell me: “I love you, babe”.
I know it’s a trick.
I’ll feel as if I were raped.
Human relationships are so very complicated...... the gap between words and reality......... truth and untruth, sin and virtue.. play... thank you for such a revealing poem
There is depth in this poem. It is sometimes the reality one has to go through and not in control. Nice.
i love to find these heart wrenching honest poems here, i love the brave attack of opening up, putting a subject like this into words, this is so refreshing to read! ! excellent and thought provoking, a wonderful and the easiest 10 of the day by far! Thankyou.
Indeed one night stands and without commitment of marriage is just a free ride trick men use to get it without responsibility. Kudos for a fabulous sensational poem that many can relate to and learn from. Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " babies cry anywhere"
without love is not 'making love', which is the best form of. Candid exprression, is the poem's added attraction. You may be glad to know that my poem 'Parallel Lines, Parallel Lives' has been published in the front page of poemHunter today as the 'Member Poem of the Day'. If you have some time, please read and comment.
A pragmatic description! I find the expression very candid! Open minded revelation of the fact.....10
Sorry for your experience. To fell being raped is sickness. The game of is sadness without true love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
behold a nice feeling