If We Fail To Love Poem by Saniya Galeyeva

If We Fail To Love

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If we fail to love,
Nobody will even notice that.
It's not a stain,
It is not shame,
It's not a flaring dirty brand.

If we fail to love,
We won't be blamed for such lifestyles.
It's not a crime
To set aside
Exciting moments and romance.

If we fail to love,
We won't be hurt and won't be mad.
It's very wise
To use your eyes
And your cold mind instead the heart.

If we fail to love,
We won't be found astray one day.
It is so safe.
The only pay
Is that our spirits will degrade.
21/06/2018

Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

when you fail to love, you begin to use your cold mind and eyes and your heart goes dull. You have said in brief, the difference between romantic poetry and the neo-classical poetry. Excellent.

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Saniya Galeyeva 20 June 2018

I`m glad you liked it.

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Bill Cantrell 20 June 2018

The safety net entangles movement, a wonderful poem! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2019

Really a poignant rendition, well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Saniya.

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Bisy Untan 18 February 2019

Life is a blessing on this earth to express the divine love to all. The poet gathered it and expressed the idea beautifully. Life is the only chance for us to love. Otherwise " our spirit will be degraded." Congratulations 🌹.

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Prabir Gayen 18 February 2019

If we fail to love, We won't be found astray one day. It is so safe. The only pay Is that our spirits will degrade....beautiful poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2018

The only pay Is that our spirits will degrade.. wonderful congregation.... if we dont love, it may not matter. nobody will find fault with us...... but, this is a great but...... wonderful poetess. tony

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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

The last line of this poem says it all.++10

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Saniya Galeyeva 20 June 2018

Thank you!

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Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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