Ah October... Poem by Mirela Athanas

Ah October...

Rating: 5.0


Ah, October, October...
You once upon a time favorite month,
My love affair with you is over,
Your cruel first day stopped a loving heart.
Now I see you and your colored leaves
You paint so beautifully as if by design,
But instead of leaves, a whole tree has fallen,
And you don't seem to care, and neither do I,
Of you,
Not even if you velvety dress in utterly golden!

Wednesday, October 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: separation,october
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 November 2020

I'm sorry that your love affair with October is over. October is still my favorite moth of the year. May you love October again some day...

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Crayon Poet 21 October 2019

I would hate losing October as my favorite month! May your cheeriness be rekindled elsewhere.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 October 2019

A well expressed write, dear Ma’am Mirela....10++

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