Alankar(Decor)-85 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor)-85

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Turn down(Cinqku)

Cinqku is a 5 line haiku
a poem in 5 lines.
syllabic. A strict syllable count of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables per line.
The Cinqku should have a turn or surprise in L4 and L5.

Turn down

High fly
Bird wingless
Looks down soaring
Sore of wounds vows to no
Rebirth

Note-
wingless bird- soul of the dead human

Saturday, September 22, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 September 2012

It does not want to have the rebirth and it flies high without wings..and interesting Cinqku, Thank you for sharing this information! .

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