Indira Renganathan


Alankar(Decor) -85


Turndown(Cinqku)

Cinqku is a 5 line haiku
a poem in 5 lines.
syllabic. A strict syllable count of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables per line.
The Cinqku should have a turn or surprise in L4 and L5.

Turndown

High fly
Bird wingless
Looks down soaring
Sore of wounds vows to no
Rebirth

Note-
wingless bird-soul of the dead human

Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 25, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Alankar(Decor) -85 by Indira Renganathan )

  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/22/2012 3:44:00 AM)

    It does not want to have the rebirth and it flies high without wings..and interesting Cinqku, Thank you for sharing this information! . (Report) Reply

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