I had close my suitcase and i looked at this.
There, was a part of my life.
I let a tear.
I knew the past was over,
the futur was unknown
and the present was here.
I heard my breath.
I smiled.
I was alive.
Oh wow this is such an amazing poem Constantin i love it u have a way with words
Nice work, Constantin. I like the way you write 'the past is over, the future is unknown, the present is here.' Why worry about the past-it's over, why worry about the future-it's unknown, let's live in the present, here and now! Take care, CeCe
And I am so happy that you are..we need to be reminded how precious life is and you are doing it in an excellent way Wishing you a joyful day and a Happy Easter! Pia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem. I liked it very much. The use of the suitcase imagery is brilliant and is what makes the poem stay in the mind.