our solar plexus
focal of Light's energy
searching connection
ALIVE is the right title for this poem which focuses on one of the chakras, I believe it is the Heart Chakra, at the center of the subtle body. Your poem shows light streaming in and then going out in search of a connection, which could be a higher stage of spiritual enlightenment or a terrestrial partner. Either way something sacred is occurring, and both options are open.
It's such a meaningful poem, Alas! neither I can explain it completely nor I can honestly comment. I am already charged of blasphemy and unsuitable comments several times.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a beautiful Senryu on solar energy and connection of human being with it. Beautiful and meaningful.