All Poem by Nisho Olme

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She asked me my name,
And I told her “I’m Zach”
But truly I’m nothing
But taken aback
I’m lonely and silent
I’m happy but sad
And when it all ends
I’m all that I’ve had

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Effie Yalena Steyn 16 December 2007

Stirring and empathetic. I like your style of writing, the rhyme could have sounded forced but it didnt. Well done. Effie xx

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