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Nur Meiyati


All About You and Me


I wish I could reciprocate
Their beautiful poems sent to me
I wish I could write
About persistent longings
About unyielding desires
About burning fire
That can only go with a romantic love
But no words I can create
Because there is no such a feeling in me

I wish I could write
About the dim moonlight
About the gentle soothing breeze
About the hues of the sky
A description about a feeling in love
But I simply cannot type any words
Because there is no such a feeling in me

All my poems consciously and subconsciously written
All the scenes captured in the paintings
Are about you and me: my eternity feeling
My stories in my poems are not chronologically arranged
But all are about us
Our stories, our words, our conversations determines the colours
And sometimes even accentuate them
If you ever read my poems
You would know and feel that
But, ah …..you will never ever read them

(Indonesia,24 October 2013)

Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

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To understand this poem you should also read my previous poems: I Informed You, 'I am Pregnant'; I Will Not Leak Our Secret Relationship, Choice, Our Small Paradise

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    All my poems consciously and subconsciously written
    All the scenes captured in the paintings.. greatness of woman. i admire....10

    I was dying for your love
    Many time I had held your hand and believed
    “That love is supreme and necessity”
    “A real blessings from almighty”

    I knew you had little hitch from the start
    But I had strong urge to be your part
    I expressed it intensely and whispered
    You gave no indication but simply smiled (Report) Reply

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