I am all alone
So cold, and as white as a bone
Betrayed, and broken
From words not spoken
Loveless is me
No one can see
How lonely I am
No one gives a damn
I'll always be a reject, and alone
Heartbreak
Heartache
Alone in a world where no one loves or cares about me
I want to decease to be
All alone, all dead
All of this pain and dread
I am dead
All alone, all alone.............
I like it alot man! I feel this way all the time. I wish I had a love of my own. But then I think of the heartbreak that WILL come shortly afterwards. NICE ONE. >.<
a write frank and honest...but you won't be that alone in the days to come, Neil...presentaion good 10
This poem is crowded with lonliness. Yet it flows it flows with an isolated rhythm that make it powerful. Good write.
very impressive write with good use of rhymes which are my favs. and nice floating stanzas which make readers easy to understand...in short very good write keep it up with the good write sir....thanks 10
very nice peom...whats kentucky like, i prefer sheffield maself! ! ? ? your poem brings a new meanin to lonliness, well done! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very nice, really very nice, so simple words, and ur poem actually means sth, very easy to understand and keep up the good work.