Neil Crosby

Rookie (December 10,1992 / Fort Knox, Kentucky)

When You See The Color Red - Poem by Neil Crosby

When you see the color red
Do you see me bloody and dead
When you see the color red
Do you picture me free of dread
What do you see
Do you see yourself hurting me
What do you see
Do you give a chance to be
When you see the color red
Did you see the rose dead
When you see the color red
Do you love me or am I just dead


Comments about When You See The Color Red by Neil Crosby

  • Rookie Demon lover (12/26/2008 11:16:00 PM)

    Very Good Neil-kun.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/21/2008 1:19:00 AM)

    neil, dont make the color red dull...red is a dominant color, , , u must be happy and be happy, , dont be negative in ur life..red s a symbol of happiness..dont look at the negative side, , u mght be as red of RED..as red as the rose..
    dont quit, cheers, , , , , i like ur poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (7/2/2008 4:13:00 AM)

    I love the colour red but I never see the bad side of this colour. Like Viola says, red depicts passion. I guess this is a passionate write though... Keep writing. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (7/2/2008 3:32:00 AM)

    passion is also depicted by the colour red...keep up the great work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 2, 2008



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