Angelic Warrior


All Is Over....... - Poem by Angelic Warrior

the lights go out.....
the city black......
all is silent.......
not a soul......
not a life.....
done........
now.......
go.... ...


Comments about All Is Over....... by Angelic Warrior

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (7/20/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    All rythmic, concise and meaningful, keep it up! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ronald Doku (7/16/2009 12:23:00 PM)

    wow. that was unique. first time i ever read something like this here. that was genius. i liked it alot (Report) Reply

  • Rookie wael karameh (7/11/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    Frankly speaking I like it because it is short, deep and you put in a nice shape(taht of the triangle): human being is a traiangle of thoughts, feelings and behaviors...

    keep the nice write...

    wael (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2009 9:31:00 PM)

    will i see a bright sunny afternoon
    those who leave tell me to be happy... yes u will and life is full of hope so carry on with it...

    read mine hopes against hope, nver say die and good bye (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Keith Hendrickson (7/7/2009 7:46:00 PM)

    lol.... very very good... style is very good and you show you got plenty of it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 8, 2009


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