All, Where, Some Poem by Asif Baloch
All, Where, Some
All where some
long since gone
the sun of happiness
did'nt even shone
the thuds of life
has killed me
night and day
my love just died
without even born
the thoughts are mingled
the fellings are sieged
the heart wants to ripped
and to be squeezed
an aching heart that touches my spirit, tearing apart my wandering soul........well penned.
Strong sputtering feelings. Words in tune with emotions...very well written....10
yeah really nice poetic impulses great write +10 regards anjali
suggesion: shine in the place of shone; has killed to have killed, even born to even being born, to ripped to to be ripped.You may get poems given language correction before being published. you have a nack of poetical expression. carry onshanmugam
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 9:38:25 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the tumultuous twists of life well expressed here definitely touches the soul