clayton young

Rookie (3/10/93 / Round Rock Texas)

Alone - Poem by clayton young

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Broken promises, Shattered dreams,
Dead emotion, Heartless uncaring devotion,
All thrown in my face.

Salty tears drawn from useless fears.
Piercing screams an unfilled seems,
It’s destroying me.

Remember the game? No I swear it’s not that same..
The score, no that’s not right

Raging crimes in the night, monsters and
Demons run in fright. And yes,
I know I’m right.

Empty promises and empty hearts,
Broken bones and angry Tones…
we are all alone

Claytony J. Young


Comments about Alone by clayton young

  • Rookie Coreena Lindquist (12/1/2009 11:08:00 PM)

    i liked it! ! very creative at the words chosen! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    Empty promises and empty hearts,
    Broken bones and angry Tones…
    we are all alone.... barentruth and fine write... beautifully descripted... well done

    reada mine 'You go all alone' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose MaryB. (5/5/2009 6:17:00 PM)

    ..your not that alone buddy.. im here! lol jp but man love the creativity with the words like 'dead emotion' i like it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 27, 2009


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