Mark R Slaughter (1957 / Norwich)

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'Alone! ' I cried

'Alone! ' I cried again.
'Alone I am with me!
Lonely in a world of mist
Alone, I reach to touch your wrist
And see if I am thee.’

To be alone beside a soul
Afloat, adrift; an empty ghoul
Alone in woe; the yearning flesh
To fill a thin, contorted mesh
Diffuse atop an icy floor, alone.

So much alone in fact, I lack
The tonal vibrancy of life:

I am a song without a tune
alone;
A greying sky in June
alone;

The blueness of a sullen moon
– waning in a starless night–
alone;

Coasting down a weedy pass
alone;
The only image in the glass
alone;

To meet a certain heavy fate
– to turn and shut the knurly gate–

…alone.



Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2009










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alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone
alone alone alone alone

alone alone alone alone

Mark R Slaughter
Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, May 04, 2011


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  • Destiny Hutchinson (1/12/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    it marks how i feel and i can feel so much aloness ur poem gets it right

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  • Zoe Cancienne (1/11/2012 9:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Mark you have a great gift with words and poetry.

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  • ViPiNS PUTHOORAN (12/9/2011 11:22:00 AM)

    [Alone I waited for solitudeness]
    A very g'd poem! ! !

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  • Brittany Brocher (7/13/2010 1:03:00 PM)

    I love it! It's really deep, and I like the words you used too. It's a really touching poem.

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  • Alishia Jefferson (12/15/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    i love your poem it is ver touching you should read some of mine and tell me what you think

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  • Danielle May (12/4/2009 4:42:00 PM)

    Phenomenal Poem! i like the words :)

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  • Wassila Nader (10/22/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    a very nice touching poem :)
    read my poem a lonely star and a lonely star 2 they are the same idea :)
    thank you very much.

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