Mark R Slaughter (1957 / Norwich)

i hope i can get the book.that's a wonderful poem.

the inner diction/ short lines all kite up the message fine write

a drink or two...and your increasing self esteem...well, a good piece, Mark...frank in tone transparent in talk open ended...i liked...10

An interesting poem, why we drink, I enjoy a couple of glasses of wine to help me wind down, but my downfall is not knowing when I've had enough lol
10 for this
Lynda xx

A good one, Mark.

Ron

I love this poem Mark.It is VERY well written and very much to the point.Many will be able to identify with it.There's truth in every line and also a warning to those who might dare to sip too often.A well deserved 10 from me.

I feel the sweat on the brow with this one, Mark. Good one! !

of you know your capacity all is well Yoy have certainly measured your words correctly

of you know your capacity all is well Yoy have certainly measured your words correctly

But a drink from the divine cup makes immortal. If anyone has to drink, let him sip divinity. Mark, you really slaughter, you slaughter the delusions.
CP