Alone In The Cold Poem by Standing in the Silence of Your Pain

Alone In The Cold

Rating: 5.0


I call her.
I need help.
She leaves me.
Im in the cold.
All alone.
I follow her.
She finally listens.
'No comprende' she says.
She takes HIS side.
The one causing my pain.
She stabs me.
She kicks me.
Says that I'll be the one to blame.
I was lost.
And confused.
I asked her for help.
Asked her to show me a paved road.
She buried it,
said, 'Oh well'
and headed for home.
She left me.
Stranded.
Just like that.
All alone.
In the cold.
On a dirt road.
I followed the road.
It was winding and hard.
Through jungles.
Through mountains.
I conquered it all.
I finally crawled onto my doorstep.
Guess who's there in the cold?
My best friend.
All alone.
The one who left me on a dirt road.
Anger makes me want to leave her.
Lock her outside.
Let her hunt for the road.
All on her own.
But that's not who i am.
So i bite my tongue.
I open the door.
And let her inside.
She tells me her problems.
The same ones i had mere days ago.
The ones that she left me to deal with.
On that dirt road.
She's my best friend.
I help her.
Cuz thats what i do.
I could never hurt her.
Not ever.
Even after being left in the cold.
On a dirt road.

All Alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelic Warrior 16 June 2009

very nice poetry! .....very beautiful.....its hard to help someone who never helped you.....but its nice to know that there are people who are selfless enough to give help even when its to some who hurt them.....the world would be a better place if people followed you lead Healing Heart 10+++: D

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Tuna Fish 14 June 2009

that was a really good poem... i shall question you about it later

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 09 June 2009

Hey girl, quick? , who's this about? Anyways, it waz a great poem Scale 1-10...10!

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 09 June 2009

Hey girl, quick? , who's this about? Anyways, it waz a great poem Scale 1-10...10!

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hmmmm....this reminds me of someone..... sad....anyways, i did enjoy this poem...thanks for sharing.... i gave you a 10

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