Treasure Island

Hailey Stump

(August 7,1998 / Dayton)

Alone Without You


When you are gone
I feel alone
When you are not near
I fear I will never see you again
When you are in pain
I go insane
When you break promises
I break down in tears
You have let me feel without a dad for far to long
And you are gone
And I am done with you
So leave me alone
So I can receive my step dads love
Because your love is not interesting anymore

Submitted: Thursday, June 05, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, July 01, 2014

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  • Cleveland Gibson (6/5/2014 2:29:00 PM)

    I like this poem but also I must add the more I read the poem I pick up a rhythm and that rhythm sets me on a downward trend. A violin can be played up(in sound) and also down(in sound) . For variation and enhancement words can be tuned to have a similar effect. The only way is up, so aim your poem in that direction.
    Best wishes and keep writing.
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