Alphabat Poem by Caroline Bulleck

Alphabat

Rating: 5.0


All
Bats
Course
Downwind
Echolocating
For
Grub.
Hiding
In
Junipers,
Katydids
Lie
Motionless.
Nevertheless,
Our
Predators
Quickly
Relocate,
Slide
Through
Underbrush,
Vanishing
With
eXtra
Yummy
Zingers.

Sunday, February 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: night,alphabetical,animal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 23 February 2020

well done..from A to Z you have created an amazing strange poem with poetic behaviour of Predators, it is unique form, thanks for sharing 10/10

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David Wood 28 December 2020

Amazing poem brilliantly put and a great read.

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Beach Girl 01 September 2020

Clever yet charming poem! Oddly enough, I was just doing some research about bats since I've been observing them flying in the evenings over my lake cabin.

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Beach Girl 29 August 2020

Really cute poem, I enjoyed it a lot!

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Kim Barney 27 August 2020

A fun exercise! I am reading this because it appeared on Bri's Showcase. Thanks for posting!

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Bri Edwards 01 March 2020

Xcept (i think P-H's) messing up some spacing in a couple of places, this is visually appealing, a bit like a bat's fluttering flight path. maybe use " Grubs" , not " Grub" ? one definition of " zingers" : " A sudden shock, revelation, or turn of events." i'd change your last 2 periods to 2 commas. bri :) to MyPoemList and maybe to share.

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