Always Poem by Iniduo Iniduo

Always

Rating: 4.9


my vast like the ocean
my airy white like a cirrocumulus

my sweet like a memory
my mercy like a child

my endless now, here, forever
my outer space, my inner flame

always my little girl

Tuesday, June 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 February 2020

A very compassionate piece of poetry, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Lovely indeed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

Cute words, sounds coziest! I have enjoyed this fascinating brevity. A 10 for the uniqueness.Thank you for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Iniduo. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 June 2017

my endless now, here, forever my outer space, my inner flame these lines are wonderful expression of love. they originate from your creative mind.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 June 2017

Reminds me of the song ALWAYS popularized by BON JOVI...Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, TAKE TIME TO THINK, and BECAUSE I LOVE HER.... Thanks...

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