Always Forward Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Always Forward

Rating: 3.3


It is sheer demonstration of hypocrisy
Like simple dream of odyssey
Nothing may improve so long it remains to be taught
Poverty may not be removed until it is fought

It is not life time dream
But we are dreaming for cream
Do nothing and wish for good
The meaning is not clearly understood

There lies real depth
That may not be overcome till death
One has to struggle whole of life’s span
Careful approach with concrete plan

Day time dreaming is good for health
At least in poverty it may add some wealth
You may feel powerful and rich
Otherwise normally it will be beyond reach

You must have some ambition
But it may need fresh impetus or ignition
It may turn fruitful
When you become successful

There is no alternative to hard struggle
It may over come all the troubles
Only honest approach and will power is needed
Rest everything thing is automatically conceded

“Who can be real winner”? Some one questioned
In book no where it is mentioned
I had no answer but gave few words
Look never backward but always forward

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

It is sheer demonstration of hypocrisy Like simple dream of odyssey

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Gajanan Mishra 02 August 2013

wonderful poem for all my dear poet, great write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

Awesome Person1 hour ago I could not really identify the persona of the poem. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

Post It's good! ! Joshua Marshall1 hour ago I like it! ! It's really good! ! Comment +1 so good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

steph niones2 hours ago positive outlook.. so encouraging Comment +1 inspirational

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

Shari Tapp2 hours ago Inspirational. I like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

ok Lal- oma2 hours ago well written Comment +1 Always Forward Review

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

Jen Flynn2 hours ago Sounds like the caste system in foreign countries, but also here in the US. I see and feel a lot of anger and sadness and perhaps a defeatist attitude. Very much a soul-searching poem. Thank you. Comment +1 Living a life full of meaning.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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