Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


##among Trees - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

one would heal another
one would'nt stand there
to see the sick one droop and wither

they do it not for a fare
they converse... their pains they share
to heal one another

their whispers we do hear
their conversation we don't decipher
to know their plights..it is not clear

man doesnt heal...man slaughters
to hear his ears aren't sharp
to slaughter his axe he sharpens

[one tree healing or curing another tree is not an illusion it is a proven fact]


Comments about ##among Trees by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (9/26/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Sensitive portrayal. Nicely penned. deserves 10++++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (7/3/2009 11:38:00 PM)

    An unthought of view
    An unheard of piece of wisdom
    As always you open
    Skylights in my mind!
    Thanks for letting in
    The rays of Gyana's Sun
    In to enlighten our souls and lives!
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/8/2009 11:28:00 PM)

    man doesnt heal...man slaughters
    to hear his ears aren't sharp
    to slaughter his axe he sharpens.......what live and lovely imagination abt life n nonlife object..... we stand to extinct the things where as they stand for togetherness//... lovely poemwith pure and scred thiughts.......reagrds (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/4/2009 7:44:00 AM)

    a vivid poem well written...10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Bindu Vidyadhar (6/4/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    Hello! ! ! Samanyan! ! ! Indeed a very valuable piece of information and inspiration. In a flow of words you have expressed the highest philosophy of life. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Vaibhav Pandey (6/3/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    this is a very good poem sam...lot to learn from this..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Deepti Agarwal (6/2/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    amazing information...
    with sad truth about 'MAN'

    wish man cud understand the power to heal to strengthen oneself then to believe in slaughtering... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (5/30/2009 4:28:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem about trees... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (5/28/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    Wah... This is a new knowledge to me.
    With this write i am very curious to read more of 'healing'
    I salute you for being one among those wonderful trees
    And to share with us, this great delight of wisdom.

    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (5/27/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    A great tribute to trees. Well said. I recollect my childwood thats sheltered me.
    Thanks for sharing with me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/26/2009 2:57:00 AM)

    'man doesnt heal...man slaughters
    to hear his ears aren't sharp
    to slaughter his axe he sharpens'

    Brilliant composition.
    Delighted,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (5/25/2009 12:06:00 PM)

    The last line is the soul of the poem. Trees give us everything they have. But we torture them, kill them for our selfish purposes. Good thought. Well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Child (5/25/2009 11:26:00 AM)

    Hi
    This is a heavy poem;

    Is is just about mutual support..?

    'one would heal another
    one would'nt stand there
    to see the sick one droop and wither' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 496 Points Subbaraman N V (5/25/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    Great observation about one of the most important creations of the Almighty! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (5/25/2009 12:58:00 AM)

    a whisper of a little tree, meant something to cure every
    memories we experienced....a mint to other sees no one
    than a touch of a tree.....you have something than what is
    the seen in your pen.... i felt it..thank you...God bless and
    may you have agood health...a 10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (5/25/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    A nice tribute to mother nature, and how true..... I am all for saving trees...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (5/24/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    among trees.......a thoughtful write.......we are gifted because if they have sixth sense and perceverance.......they may uproot us.... thank you for your kind sharing........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (5/23/2009 10:21:00 PM)

    A wonderful tribute to trees. I dream often of the great elms that sheltered my childhood.
    Beautiful, Sananyan.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (5/22/2009 11:14:00 PM)

    A great tribute to trees and to nature in general Samanyan - if only humans could follow suit...10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Ken E Hall (5/22/2009 11:13:00 PM)

    Very interesting to read and muse....the amazon is a world to its self, my own backyard is a wonder of them and they give the air that we breath, thanks for the read
    regards (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, November 2, 2009


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