Amongst Us Poem by Seema Aarella

Amongst Us

Rating: 4.7


In their privacy
Brooding in Personal pain
All are a Devdas

Given to customs
They veil love, hide tears, and suffer
Many Parvati

Courtesans of fate
Entertains all, self in pain
Some Chandramukhi

Friday, January 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

three characters suffering because of others..a lovely differtiation

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

very creative ma'm.....I loved each of them.

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

experimental...and definitely a successful attempt

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Reshma Ramesh 25 January 2009

superb short writes..............very good seema

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