Treasure Island

abhimanyu kumar.s

(31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

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I am alone, I wait
Under my hairs of heir
For to make a decision
Should I move right or left
Left to the ardor of hope
Right to the weeping hollows
Parallel or vertical in circle
I am caught in a oval plane.

My watch is slow, I see
Around my land and people
I think to move from all
To the edge of death
I wish my time and clock
Be stolen and said
My child it's time up
Come, I am waiting for you.

Submitted: Wednesday, November 09, 2011
Edited: Friday, November 25, 2011

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  • Binish Cd (12/14/2011 10:33:00 AM)

    i think its the poets desire to remain in a state of happiness. A good work. (Report) Reply

  • Heath Gunn (12/5/2011 3:41:00 PM)

    This reads as an early work before you really got to grips with your punctuation, it is that which makes your poetry flow in other readings (Report) Reply

  • grame peele (11/17/2011 3:58:00 AM)

    a live dramatization before lord. you set a tone which tells clearly the mood. (Report) Reply

  • Uche Chidozie (11/12/2011 10:59:00 PM)

    in dilemma, confused, can't decide the decision to take at a point in time, reasoning death as the only solution, this is the exact condition 80% of humans found theirselves.......good work bro. (Report) Reply

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