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abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 40 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

' I '


I am a soul
Your life force
I am the driver
Really just a pinpoint of life
My throne between my brows
Detach from the world around me.

I am a ruler
Ruler of all my sense organs
In the problems of days
Your changing ways
I remain as I am, as
I am just a peaceful soul.

I feel far away from you
Away from the physical world
I am beyond your world
Beyond from intellect and traits
I am peaceful here
I am a meta soul.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 20, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, July 20, 2011

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  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (6/15/2012 5:19:00 AM)

    I reviewed and it disappeared.. I said wonderful perception and imagism... I felt immediatly calmed after reading this... tyvm top marks..Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points George Bernard Hough (1/14/2012 7:02:00 PM)

    A very interesting viewpoint on the soul of man, please read my `Genes` and give me your` valued comments. Thank You. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virginia Pecho Gely (1/14/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    I love this poem, outpouring in pureness and humility. The senses have overpassed the understanding of one'self. This poem incites our awareness that even we are so tiny in this big wide world, each of us is part of the endless constillations. A positive poem for a changing world like ours. Thanks for sharing and in winging us in your world! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Rajendran Muthiah (1/14/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    Dear friend, Being a meta soul beyond the comprehension of intellect and imagination. you are a mystic gone deep into that world seeking communion with the Eternal. This kind of poem everyone can not write. Those who are bereft of ambition, affection, animosity, amoral sense.. alone can plunge into this distant world. A well written poem.Your meditation has transported you to a higher level to see His world. Cheers for pouring lines of the metaphysical world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (1/13/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    Great write... powerful truth. This poem is a product of enlightened inspiration. Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (1/13/2012 10:13:00 AM)

    It must help you to have a picture in your mind of the soul. I quite like the idea of the soul on a throne between your brows. I like that because it seems an original idea, while concepts like the meta soul slip past me, perhaps because it or they are borrowed from one or other religion. No? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Gordon (1/12/2012 8:39:00 PM)

    Very interesting and thought-provoking with good imagery. Almost rather fascinating. Hmm. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Thando Mashinini (1/12/2012 3:03:00 PM)

    I am beyond your world
    Beyond from intellect and traits....now this is short and
    Mind challenging, I really like it. It's a pure description of a soul,
    U also reflected that the soul doesn't actually abide by
    Majority rule. Wonderful man, great piece of poetry!
    GOD bless! (Report) Reply

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