(31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

poet abhimanyu kumar.s
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A Lonely Heart

To the moment I can write
In presence of my breath
With evidence of my veins strength
That I feel lonely on earth
Under the roof of almighty
I miss her to the extent
The very extent of my existence.

How to express this moment
Were I am hungry for her
I feel a pain in my heart
It seems to shatter my nerves
I want her in this moment
In this painful moment of tranquility
But she is far as I am.

Submitted: Tuesday, November 01, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, November 16, 2011

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  • Kelvin Owusu (9/13/2012 6:53:00 AM)

    a good poem good of u to share

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  • Anita Khelawan (7/25/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    so subtle yet effective... i loved the line..'That I feel lonely on earth under the roof of almighty' thnx for sharing (:

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  • Halalisani Immaculate-pleasure Mchunu (7/23/2012 1:14:00 AM)

    Your style is unique and too nice, keep it up

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  • Kayode Adebare (6/15/2012 5:14:00 AM)

    Good one keep it up, i really love it More Grease to your Elbow

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  • Ramesh Rai (6/15/2012 4:07:00 AM)

    No matter. a good poem dedicated to her

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  • Roongratt Srimanchantha (6/13/2012 5:31:00 AM)

    It's so sad..you seem to know how to use words to express yourself..well done! !

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  • Uguru-okorie Joseph (4/18/2012 11:08:00 PM)

    I envy the way you express your feeling, urge you to move on.

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  • Onon Sarker (4/16/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    I liked it. keep it up.

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  • Daxton Tutty (3/21/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    good work raise me up too

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  • Lord's Gift (3/17/2012 1:42:00 PM)

    Well done! That pain of love a sting that leaves one to an reaction like this. I Love it & I hope you pursue a career at this your truly gifted under the roof of the Almighty.

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