The night has been dead without you around,
the silence makes me think of things that i shouldn't anymore..
It's been past for a while,
since we last shared a smile,
since we shared a secret,
since.. we stopped being what we were.
My heart is deeply aching by your absence,
you used to be a part of me,
and now, i am incomplete.
But i've learn,
just learned how to survive,
is just this silence in my heart,
the one that is aching right now.
I'll stand up tomorrow and keep on fighting,
keep on pretending it is not happening,
pretending i didn't lose my best friend...
But it will end somehow...
'...you used to be a part of me, and now, i am incomplete'... expression emotion rich...well written piece Ana...conveys very well the heart ache youngters often feel in love affairs...thanks...10
Very well expressed poem. Yes your last line is true and last verse is good. Very well crafted with nice feel and flow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes, the flow is smooth..touching and romantic.....but remember. time heals a broken heart