Heather Burns

An Autumn Breeze - Poem by Heather Burns


Caught in the
mysteries of life
trying to blend

an Autumn breeze

leaves rustle
carried away by
a gust of wind

Comments about An Autumn Breeze by Heather Burns

  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (8/22/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    Life is also as subtle like a whiff of Autumn breeze
    And few realize it till its time to drop like a dry leaf..........

    Great poem with maximum meaning and minimum words. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,455 Points Ramesh Rai (8/21/2014 1:42:00 PM)

    Each words are to be felt and realised like the autumn breeze catches. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/20/2014 3:37:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write Heather. We all are caught by Autumn breeze, no one can avoid it either. It will come and go.
    Many leaves too it carry along with it. Let us hope it carries our painful memories too along with it. Thanks for sharing with us. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/20/2014 1:46:00 AM)

    Leaves rustle and lives tremble with the touch of autumn breeze......Heather......we are all under the laws of Nature, autumn will come and autumn will go leaving marks on leaves and lives......sweet and succinct......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 19, 2014

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