Heather Burns


Your Smile - Poem by Heather Burns

Your smile

captured my attention

slowly embroidered your name

upon my heart

filling a vacancy.



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Comments about Your Smile by Heather Burns

  • Veteran Poet - 1,908 Points Stephen Katona (3/18/2015 2:36:00 AM)

    Such apparent simplicity hides a wealth of meaning. After reading this wonderful poem several times I have grown to love this poem. It reminds us to remember the powerful of our smiles, helps us imagine our smiles embroidering our names on the hearts of those who receive them and know how important it is to fill those vacant spaces. It takes great skill to express so much in so few words. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,033 Points Lyn Paul (2/15/2015 4:22:00 PM)

    Fabulous just what a smile can do, even if it is not for love. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,283 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/21/2014 6:25:00 AM)

    A sweet smile is an arrow of cupid. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,735 Points Ramesh Rai (9/27/2014 10:23:00 PM)

    I love every smile. Thanks for share. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/15/2014 3:56:00 AM)

    Love floats on each word so nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,025 Points Bri Edwards (1/2/2014 3:36:00 PM)

    yes, short AND sweet. a true story or a good imaginaiton? i wonder. i found you in dinesh nair's new years poem. i, coincidentally, just deposited SMILES and Smile, two shorties, into my poem list. thanks for sharing. ;) bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (8/11/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    Brief but powerful thread as the effect of that Smile upon your heart! :)
    Love it.
    Good Luck! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,892 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 3:43:00 AM)

    Excellent expression of how smile can capture a heart (not everybody's though) ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Jayachandran Chakrapany (8/8/2013 2:29:00 AM)

    With a few words beautifully narrated the true essence of pure romance.jk (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 732 Points Shahzia Batool (8/7/2013 10:45:00 AM)

    a delicate thought Ms. Burns...gripping in effect! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,178 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    Wow..Fantastic write....Smile has wonderful effect..So true...Loved reading it... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,631 Points Neela Nath (8/6/2013 9:02:00 PM)

    Smile has wonderful effect on us! Expression is so beautiful.Never could imagine. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,640 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/6/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    Smile filling a blank space on heart by embroidering. Beautifully put in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 5, 2014


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