hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,007 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

An Honest Man - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Neither do I claim my self to be an honest man
Nor I do give any guarantee to my woman
I have tried to remain loyal as far as possible
But life has remain problem and full of troubles

I know for sure that she was one of the best
Did all whatever she could and proved true to test
Yet something was troubling and keeping her away
Her behavior was coming definitely on the way

It is sweet tug of war between couples
It is so when they get into doubles
Children change their way of living
It is now question of faith and believing

Some of the interests are forgotten for cordiality
Some of the couples show it as their best quality
Despites lots of difference they try patch up
Keep relation in tact and nicely cover up

There is no need to express regret or feel sorry
Some of the fears keep surfacing and add to worry
Life is another name for on going struggle
Compared to that of timely appearance of water bubble

How come that ship can sail smooth?
People may try very hard in their youth
Yet some of the tricky ways dishearten
The patience runs out of it all of sudden

It takes years of time to adjust
It is almost known and must
As it demands greater degree of understanding
It gives enough of time to correct image and standing


Comments about An Honest Man by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Anthony John Oliveros (9/19/2011 9:01:00 AM)

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/19/2011 7:08:00 AM)

    It takes years of time to adjust
    It is almost known and must
    As it demands greater degree of understanding
    It gives enough of time to correct image and standing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, September 19, 2011


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