(2006)

What do you think this poem is about?

An Issue of Trust

I do not allow
people
into my heart.

I do not trust them
to not
tear it all apart.

I do not trust
people
not to hurt or betray
me.

And so I protect
my heart
by locking the gate
and hiding the key.

In all of this mistrust
I can clearly see
That one I truly do not trust
is me.

Submitted: Wednesday, August 23, 2006
Edited: Friday, August 27, 2010


Comments about this poem (An Issue of Trust by Noemi Lee )

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  • Rupert Park (3/31/2008 11:52:00 PM)

    very good, the end was fantastic!

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  • Preeti - is here! (8/25/2006 9:40:00 AM)

    I agree with Brian, the end was very good.
    Preets

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  • Brian Dorn (8/23/2006 5:05:00 PM)

    Noemi, great ending... very profound. Well done! !
    Brian

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