Kranthi Pothineni


An Omen - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

We all love in deep
That makes us reap
A smile even in sleep
It gives us lot of heap
And makes us to leap

One-day time will peep
And it will slowly creep
To make clean sweep
Of all our hearts keep
And makes us asleep

Its like falling from steep
Life seems to be cheap
In pain of close sheep
With no one to beep
It makes us to weep

Slowly time will seep
Like a chimneysweep
It wakes us from dogsleep
But let the hearts outweep
So we will never oversleep

It’s words from heartdeep


Comments about An Omen by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/11/2010 3:05:00 AM)

    ‘Rhyme in chime
    Fine n’ fine
    Forget whine
    Love is sublime
    Twine n twine’ ~ niv…excellent poetry
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/5/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    mature thoughts nice to reflect on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/24/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    Nice presentation, with a statutory warning. You sound like a Philosopher. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/23/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    Great poem with fabulous end rhymes......................................10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 794 Points Louis Rams (7/23/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    like the chimney sweep, it sweeps us away.

    good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (7/23/2009 11:41:00 AM)

    again a good poem in rhymes............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (7/23/2009 11:17:00 AM)

    awesome poem! ! ! ! ! !
    i love your work, its always good, and it's always so much fun to read! !
    brilliant! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (7/23/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    a magical write......... beautifully crafted.......... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,184 Points Saadat Tahir (7/23/2009 7:57:00 AM)

    hi karanthi
    very directed and worked out rhyme...
    great effort there

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/23/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    'Slowly time will seep
    Like a chimneysweep
    It wakes us from dogsleep
    But let the hearts outweep
    So we will never oversleep

    It’s words from heartdeep'

    I like these rhymes kanthi....
    and nice lively write indeed.. great words of wisdom! ! !

    with love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (7/23/2009 5:39:00 AM)

    Time is a magical word in life. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,232 Points Marieta Maglas (7/23/2009 5:09:00 AM)

    nice poem, original rhymes....................10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/23/2009 4:37:00 AM)

    a lovely poem with great rhyme put in. but is not rhyme a little too much
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 23, 2009


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