Kranthi Pothineni

Axiom Of Life - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

In my eyes of heart
In my heart of eyes
Magical moon had lit
Many stars smiled
Over my clouded heart

On my drums of heart
On my heart of drums
Songs played magically
Music oozed slowly
Over my beat less heart

To my dreams of heart
To my heart of dreams
Life roused freshly
Smile smiled smilingly
On dry lips of my heart

For my life of heart
For my heart of life
Colors faded naturally
Season changed timely
For me to be my part

Comments about Axiom Of Life by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Veteran Poet - 1,392 Points Indira Renganathan (12/14/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    A different way of words, very unusual on life...interesting and excellent....thanks
    ..and thanks for your comments on my poems too (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Louis Rams (12/12/2009 5:21:00 PM)

    beautifully written, a job well done. a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (12/11/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    Sweet music to the soul.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,100 Points Antonio Liao (12/11/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    'soon my heart murmur' magical and excellent perfume of the
    Heart....thank you for sharing this lovely and loving smooth of line in the
    Hammocks of life.....God bless....a 10 +++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (12/10/2009 7:28:00 PM)

    stunning and touching...this was woven with a magical song and your lines has a very nice flow....great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 185 Points Anju Addanki (12/10/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    a wonderful one fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/10/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    the poem is right in size... you have used 'easy to understand' words... you formed the poem with good organization... what can i say?

    well done... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (12/9/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    'Heart is life and life is heart'-This is well expressed in the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (12/9/2009 5:19:00 PM)

    All seems to be music at times (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,519 Points Marieta Maglas (12/9/2009 2:39:00 PM)

    Smile smiled smilingly

    wonderful metaphorical poem, very well written, lovely rhymes

    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/9/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    Finest play of words with blend of excellent theme…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2009

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