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An Open Letter To Mosquitoes

Oh mosquitoes! Humming
like a helicopter shoddy,
And landing on a helipad
of our fragile body.

If you want to drink our
blood, just drink, who cares,
Because many do the same
from our soul, puerile and bare.

Learn to sip it gently as a
politician of this world does,
Without making loud noise
without making much fuss.

Our other complain is why you
need to sing music in our ears,
Did you have Mozart, Beatles
Madonna or Jackson as peers.

Learn to inject the little pain-
killer from your proboscis
Learn to refrain from injecting
the killer virus of diseases.

You may sip blood but why
you need to inject germs,
Why help doctor earn money
Are they your peers or chums

With this open letter, we
declare truce with your species,
Henceforth you would not
treat human as your dishes.

Submitted: Sunday, November 22, 2009
Edited: Saturday, July 16, 2011


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  • Aditi Dutta (1/2/2011 2:52:00 AM)

    This is seriously funny!

    Learn to sip it gently as a
    politician of this world does,
    Without making loud noise
    without making much fuss.

    ....really liked it

    1 person liked.
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  • Prasanna Kumari (8/8/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    hahaha...i liked it...thoughtful and funny at the same time....

  • premji premji (12/1/2009 11:00:00 AM)

    lovely piece...hummmmmmmmmmm....
    only a doc can write this poem........10

  • Indira Renganathan (11/29/2009 3:24:00 AM)

    Much delightful...this being the cold season and season of mosquitoes, I hope they read your words to hum or buzz their response in your ears....enjoyable verses...thank you...
    And thanks for your comments on my poem too

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (11/28/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    A fantastic open letter to musquitoes with examples quoted in support of their activities.

  • Milena Veleva (11/22/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    I hope your mosquitoes are enough literate... to read your open letter :)
    as always, original and creative piece of writing, Dr. Sheth.

  • Kranthi Pothineni (11/22/2009 2:56:00 AM)

    Creativity of your's is displayed in this write. Very well plotted and interesting too. Enjoyed this write of your's a lot. Many 10's for this piece.

  • Carol Gall (11/22/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    ver well written hate them myselff 10

  • Sandra Martyres (11/22/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    A delightful piece Dr. Hitesh, very original indeed...I thoroughly enjoyed it..thanks 10++++

  • Dhanya M G (11/22/2009 12:22:00 AM)

    very innovative writing indeed...

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