Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # An Unplanned Journey - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
no money taken even
no idea where am goin
no plans of destination even
no....going is not my decision even

like a child
pulled out of it's play
by its parent
i walk along
leaving behind.. body

Comments about # # An Unplanned Journey by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie Ranjit Ravindran (10/18/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (7/12/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Maia Padua (7/8/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    very soulful write...
    When we travel towards our 'main' destination...
    leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true..
    very nice write Sam...

    maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Meggie Gultiano (7/7/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (7/4/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go.
    10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (7/2/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    A soul write indeed. Strength for the journey,
    my friend.10+.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Seema Aarella (6/30/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    Amazing write....apt thoughts and descriptions...we all do so many things by obligation of duty without applying our soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Really a good read...Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/29/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Like pulling a tree out of the ground. - NOTHING (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Raj Arumugam (6/29/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    an exciting out-of body experience? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,443 Points Louis Rams (6/28/2009 8:31:00 PM)

    when the soul leaves its shell, it's moving quite well.
    the soul is taken a second look at what it has to do.

    gr8t write a ten (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,311 Points Ken E Hall (6/28/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    No plans best and enjoy no plans only insurance life is beautiful
    .a....10 regards... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Fay Slimm (6/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    We can all take that journey at any time Sam - -and glad you have reminded us of the opportunity we have to be - - just free....10 + ++ Fay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (6/28/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    Very impressive, Sam. Don't leave yet, we need you here.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (6/27/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    True when we came, we were empty handed. When we take the final journey, we go empty handed. This truth is highlighted in the poem well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (6/27/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    mental telepathy...or is it only a vision? ...naizz (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 947 Points Ency Bearis (6/27/2009 11:52:00 AM)

    a journey in a dream must be.....interesting...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (6/27/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    A great piece leave your reader to decipher the nature of your unplanned journey....10 from me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandian Angelina (6/27/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    Death a parent who leads us
    From this child's play on earth
    To other worthy work on high
    What a stupendous thought
    The parent holds our hand
    And leads us on, so, no fear
    Other players may shed a tear
    But soon forget and resume to play!
    As always your thoughts are so different, refreshing and inspiring.
    Angel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Tara Chettur (6/27/2009 7:43:00 AM)

    carefree attitude like that of child if we carry it along as an adult is always misunderstood as irresposibility....?
    good thought 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (6/27/2009 7:41:00 AM)

    A free ticketless journey reserved for all at any moment in life! True! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 27, 2009

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