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# # an unplanned journey

no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
no money taken even
no idea where am goin
no plans of destination even
no....going is not my decision even

like a child
pulled out of it's play
by its parent
i walk along
leaving behind..
...my body

Submitted: Saturday, June 27, 2009

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  • Ranjit Ravindran (10/18/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever.

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  • Kesav Easwaran (7/12/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10

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  • Maia Padua (7/8/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    very soulful write...
    When we travel towards our 'main' destination...
    leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true..
    very nice write Sam...

    maia

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  • Meggie Gultiano (7/7/2009 8:09:00 AM)

    and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (7/4/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go.
    10 Karin Anderson

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  • Sandra Fowler (7/2/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    A soul write indeed. Strength for the journey,
    my friend.10+.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Seema Aarella (6/30/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    Amazing write....apt thoughts and descriptions...we all do so many things by obligation of duty without applying our soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Really a good read...Thanks!

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (6/29/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Like pulling a tree out of the ground. - NOTHING

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  • Raj Arumugam (6/29/2009 4:52:00 AM)

    an exciting journey...an out-of body experience?

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  • Louis Rams (6/28/2009 8:31:00 PM)

    when the soul leaves its shell, it's moving quite well.
    the soul is taken a second look at what it has to do.

    gr8t write a ten

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