And...What For Him Stayed From That Years Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

And...What For Him Stayed From That Years

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depression is tiring this man
he is dreaming briefly,
but this still one dream
non-stop the same...

he still small in shorts
and big woman with the belt
in the hand, blue bowl, in which often
he soaked one's the achy body

both four walls and four corners
in which so often he was standing.
as punishment of which never, to
comprehend not could.

today he is playing with the grandson,
detests women, and still is afraid
of them...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 16 September 2009

Dear Madam, I am not interested, whom You are supporting. Mr IB is not for me authority. All his commentaries, and votes will be deleted by me. Even, if it were 20 v. Apart from that, is 'rude' - used my surname, without my agreement, in the wrong way - saying gently. But it is a not worth matter remarks. I wrote the poem the way I wanted and I ask nobody for writing by me. I don't have such a need. My readers are able to think and reading my poems isn't inconveniencing them. it is straight, similarly to the title, in this poem.Title - is asking questions, on which you can answer- will leave the TRAUMA...The entire plot doesn't require the translation. She was tested by me 'on people' :)) - in it, on children, from the primary school. I am not interested in a focus on one subject and a cliché. It probably, causes controversies...I am writing for pleasure and for people, which can suits my writing. It are not having to be everyone. I am not seeking honours, awards etc. I can differ in it from many persons.I am writing for pleasure and for people which the can suits my writing. It are not having to be everyone. I am not seeking honours, awards etc. I can differ in it from many persons. Thanks to that I am truly free, of what it isn't possible to say about everyone. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Milica Franchi De Luri 16 September 2009

I agree with Ian Bowen.You need to look at the poem again and re do it. The title doesn't make sense. Mayby you can say; .. 'and....why did he stay for so many years'.

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Catrina Heart 16 September 2009

fine composition shared....i had a nice read thanks! ! !

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