Another Chance? Poem by karamia smith

Another Chance?

Rating: 3.5


So many things happened before
Hurt, lies, and betrayal
When you walked out of my life through that door
I thought, 'How can I prevail? '.
I spent so many nights all alone
Crying and wondering what to do
I knew my shot at love was blown
But I still loved you.
After a while, the pain went away
And I didn't hurt so bad
My skies came out of the dreary gray
And for once I wasn't so sad.
I still missed you quite a lot
And some nights I was still depressed
But I'd gotten over you, or so I thought
I could see you without being stressed.
But when you walked back through that door today
I felt the sad spark of a dead romance
One that made me want to say
'Should I give you another chance? '.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 10 June 2009

Awww, all i hope he dont break your heart

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

In case of love, a second chance should be given for it can seep through the heart of the one who betrayed you before and can make him or her melt so softly that the same love and feelings for eachother can have a rebirth but with more intensity this time.........10

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Lady Grace 05 June 2009

this poem is expressing deep thought..should you give her/him another chance? ..well, think twice before everything..grace

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Toni Bellanger 04 June 2009

Something we can all relate to, love never leaving us. Sad, and maybe just a little hopeful.

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