Ants Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Ants

Rating: 5.0


I found you all in the brown sugar bottle early morning
And I thought how lucky your living,
When I compare myself dump in the tar barrel boiling?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 13 March 2009

You say little to say much. Excellent, Nimal. Kind regards, Sandra

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Joseph Daly 16 May 2008

Brief and to the point. A lovely penning meastro. The brevity unlies the profound beauty of this. Thank you for making my day.

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Alison Cassidy 15 May 2008

Angst penned with wit and irony. You convey so much in such a few well chosen words, Nimal. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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