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Bri Edwards

Veteran Poet - 3,857 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Any Man With Money Can Have One ....... [VERY SHORT; NOT personal (really): a romantic evening; humor]


The night was young, the wine was old,
inside was warm, outside was cold.
The dance was slow, and I was bold.
My heart beat fast. Her hair was gold.
My two hands...... were on her waist.
Her two eyes said...“make haste, make haste.'

If YOU envy me, then drop a load;
pick up a “babe” where dolls are sold.

(August 28,2013)

Submitted: Wednesday, November 27, 2013

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THIS is mostly from my imagination...really! 'load' refers to a good sum of money.....not that i would know how much. there is a good reason why 'babe' and 'dolls' share the same line. any questions? ?

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  • Gold Star - 14,468 Points John Westlake (11/9/2014 3:06:00 AM)

    Sounds like you had a nice time of it to be sure. I'd rather not buy a doll though thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,033 Points Noreen Carden (11/29/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    Hi Bri what kind of dolls are you speaking of i just worry you will end up in the dog house on a permanent basis.
    enjoyed reading as usual (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,123 Points Wahab Abdul (11/27/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    wow! so sweet a poem it is, it is your credit to write this kind poetry...and i must say this style is different from your earlier most of the poems.. kudos.. i love it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,857 Points Bri Edwards (11/27/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    i forgot to include in my poet note that, when i wrote the poem in a paper notebook several months ago, i wrote waste instead of waist. how many of you would have corrected me, I WONDER. :) (Report) Reply

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