Nature naughty
Sitting on the tree
Pulled an apple
An’ threw it down
Inadvertently…
Down the tree
It struck
On the head of
The meditating
Philosophy!
Crazy!
It turned out
To be a big inventive
Technology!
29th January 2010
Interesting poetic lines yet scientific one as law of gravity stated...
The meditating Philosophy! ....only this makes the reader puzzle first...but soon cleared....a nice attept of innovation at the invention....thank you
clear lines that illustrate the nature of the partnership between the creative/inventive mind and nature
great... satirical piece... amusing...thoughts' provoking... apple..the legend of original sin the fruit of knowledge... from tilling the land to high technology nowadays... very nice idea....brilliant thoughts....as always... 10+++ Snow
Excellent satire and quite amusing. as well. We are helpless against nature and all of its mysterious ways.10+, Always your friend, Sandra
seems the apple plays a significant role in our lives...from Adam and Eve to Newton.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely sir...when i started i thought it may be adam...finally it turned out the crazy gravity...10