Aquarius Poem by Valerie Dohren
Aquarius
The Fish are dying!
Polluted our crystal clear waters -
our once green valleys, choked and grey
with the debris of living
Lost is all Virginity
and the orbs clamber through space
gasping for breath
Yet now a new Age dawns
amidst the turmoil -
promise of a Golden Age for man
(Insensitive automaton)
And everywhere the cry -
'Big Brother is watching you'
‘ BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU'
Stark observations. Fierce reminder that just because we live here, it doesn't mean we own the place. Great write.
the end of one era and the beginning of another cycle..
A very thoughtful write detailing how the nature is threatened, though we try to camouflage .
I really like how you feel in this write. We actually have very similar thoughts on nature. I am an avid birder too! Good job on the portraying of anger towards destruction and being kept under finger!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/22/2024 6:10:28 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A good insight into the world today, a very descriptive poem, nice one.