amitav mazumdar

Rookie - 79 Points (14/02/1973 / KOLKATA)

Around My Words - Poem by amitav mazumdar

(I saw my tears rippling down in the streams
I found all my pains dancing in my dreams)

(1)
In a white uncrumpled paper, I would
I could do so before, my stumbling mood
A standalone shadow, when overlaps another
Gets some space finally, like a good neighbour
However exhumed, without any trace to follow
Deep inside so much, ne’er to glow-

(2)

When the window shuts, without any force
I found myself, locked up in an unmined source
Everything precious, well-handed with preciseness
But I dips and drops in a black unholiness
Still something would, perhaps after many winters
I may behold that, without a drop of single feathers

(3)

The paper white as an ivory flutters up sometimes
But nothing I could put, as fresh as limes
When a bird I saw wandering above in vain
Weariness the word I prefer and a thankful strain
The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening
But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering


Poet's Notes about The Poem

the pain that stungs a poet when he fails to scribble

Comments about Around My Words by amitav mazumdar

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (3/27/2016 9:09:00 AM)

    The golden streaks and luminous fragments of evening
    But I couldn’t capture to get something a little simmering
    amitav mazumdar.. The struggle of a poet when he engages himself in writing. dear poet you have excellently brought to life this struggle. thank you very much. tony (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (9/10/2013 11:29:00 AM)

    Wow. Wonderful write. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/31/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    good poem with good imagery
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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