Arrows Of Thought Poem by Debra Kemper

Arrows Of Thought

Rating: 4.0


There they stand
all bunched together
in a black coffee mug.

Most of them are the standard yellow,
but, one is red,
three are pale blue with yellow bunnies, and
two are green with pink hearts.
All have a proud pink nub on the top.

They gather stoically -
their potential
hidden in their innards,
waiting to be pointed towards
a thought.

They sit,
nonchalantly mute,
until grasped by
fingers with white tipped nails,
or
fingers with dirt-caked
knuckles.

It is amazing to watch
when
a pencil is
deliberately
picked up and aimed.

Somehow, without a cord,
or a memory card,
or one little megabyte,

magic begins
as pencil
meets
paper.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyler Smith 17 April 2009

There's no wonder that you're a creative writing teacher. This is some primo stuff. This is a title poem, right? All I know is that your imagery, complimented by your attention to the minute details, forms a poem that I certainly will not forget for a long time. This is one of the greatest poems that I have ever read. You should definitely share this with the class as -your- literary thought ;) . Have you had this published yet, or tried to? I think, if you haven't yet, you should submit this, as this high of caliber poems don't get written often. Absolutely brilliant, Mrs. Kemper.

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Kilee Burton 16 April 2009

Mrs. Kemper, I wish I had sweet writing skills like you. This was an awesome poem! Good job!

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Ashleigh Michaud 15 April 2009

hey mrs. k! ! good one! ! i love it! ! i finally got the hang of this program thing! ! : -) i love this poem though... you're good

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Debra Kemper

Debra Kemper

Pocatello, Idaho
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