Cleo Blue

Rookie (Midnight / The Dark Cloud of Angels)

As I Am - Poem by Cleo Blue

As i said,
I am broken,
As i said,
I am down,
As i said,
My heart's like walking through,
A silent ghost town.
As i said,
I do cry,
As i said,
I will try,
As i said,
I will Stand on my feat,
as i said,
I will not take defeat,
As i am,
You will accept me,
As i am,
I will stand tall,
As I am,
You will have to see,
That i won't ever fall.
But that's difficult because.
I am broken,
I am down,
My heart's like walking,
through a silent ghost town.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

no story here.... just about trying to get up when you has fallen... emotionally down and stuff

Comments about As I Am by Cleo Blue

  • Rookie - 0 Points Waseem A Malla (12/21/2012 9:52:00 AM)

    nice flow in ur poem.. Good (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (12/20/2012 10:50:00 AM)

    Like the arrangement of words and the imagery, great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,248 Points Sallam Yassin (11/27/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    stand tall, take from every moment of your past
    what good for tomorrow
    well done
    keep up
    god bless u (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012

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