To Be Me Poem by Cleo Blue

To Be Me

Rating: 5.0


If Aphrodite cast a spell
All would be well
in my heart
My voice rings out like a church bell
Its like a play and ive forgotten my part

Ive forgotten what to do
Cuz im not standing beside you
I guess i have to write my own lines
While You sit there with your cheeses and you wines
But your not even the director of this play

So how can you tell me what to say?
How can you tell me what to feel?
While im still trying to figure out if what i feel is real....
How can you tell me....
To be me?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Well as you guys have probly guessed i went through this really bad break up...i guess its true what they say about 'teen love' but if 'teen love' doesn't mean anything then WHY IS IT SO PAINFUL! Im also writing this from the top of my head cuz i want to see how creative i still am..Soo i do appricieate commentts and it makes me feel all happy inside! And it makes me hate life less soo please review or whatever i will be happy if you just rank or favorite me and my poems too! thanks even if you dont! {i would say i love you all but i am now incapable of loving anymore...Thanks alot Jake! } This started out as a love poem and now i dont know what it is! lol
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
So Close 20 December 2012

thats just amzing....the begining was superb.... »so close«

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Hazel Durham 23 December 2012

Loved this, very creative poem with lovely lines!

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Kanav Justa 21 December 2012

a very positive poem, , , , , , and a honest one as well

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Darkangel Flyfree 21 December 2012

Excellent...always be yourself, no matter how people tell you to feel! ! !

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Barbara Nixon 20 December 2012

Great poem, very expressive and heartfelt.

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So Close 20 December 2012

thats just amzing....the begining was superb.... »so close«

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